Wow!! This so pretty!!!! I love her hair and eyes and everything! *o* Nice color choices too!!! The whole things just very pleasing to the eye!!! One thing I might suggest, is that usually elbows bend at the ribs, but depending on the style your going for that really doesn't matter. (I know Clamp made all their character have long arms that bended at the hips in Tsubasa, and it worked great for the style. So it all depends on the look!) Great job!!! This is such a beautiful picture!!!
Interesting choice of clothing and colors :] the light colored clothes contrast with the tone of her skin and hair, making all the "natural" parts of her beautifully stick out. I like how the umbrella sort of "frames" her face too.